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My favorite animal（100字）
Dogs are my favorite animals. Because they are friendly topeople and clever.
There is a pet dog in my family . Her name is Beibei and she istwo years old. She has two big eyes and she is white. Her favoritefood is meat and bread. She likes to sleep and play with balls. She canwalk on two legs.My family like her very much.I take her for a walkevery day .
Beibei is my best friend and I love her very much.
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