My weekend(100字)
I had a good time last weekend. My family spent the weekend on a farm.
On Saturday morning ,we went to the farm by car .I milked a cow and fed chickens with my sister. We were very happy. In the afternoon , we picked some strawberries . They were fresh and delicious . At night , we put up a tent and camped there . We made afire and cooked some food. On Sunday morning ,I went fishing with my father .My sister flew the kite with my mother.Then we went home in the afternoon.
In a word, I had a happy weekend.
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