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My school trip(91字)

It was sunny last Sunday . My school went to climb the mountain.The trip was really interesting.

We went there by bus. The mountain was very beautiful . It took us about two hours to the top. On the top of the mountain , we were very excited and happy . We saw lots of tall trees and clouds. And the air was clean. We took a great many photos there . In the end, we bought some gifts in the shop .

All in all , it was an exciting day. We were very tired but happy !

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阿德密
2025-04-02
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